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2013年全国各地市中考英语试卷分类解析汇编：
书面表达之话题
【2013河南】每个人都是独一无二的，都有与众不同之处，人们喜欢你一定会有很多原因。请以“What akes e a good friend?”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求: 1.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.80词左右。
What akes e a good friend?
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【范文】
One possible version
What akes e a good friend?
I a a boy easy to get along with. I never get angry easily. That's the ost iportant reason that akes e so popular.
I' always ready to help others. Whenever y friends eet with troubles, I will give the a hand without even a oent's thought.
Besides, I' quite huorous. I can always tell soe jokes or funny stories to ake y friends laugh. They say tie spent with e is full of fun.
I' honest I never tell lies. So I' a friend worth trusting.
【2013河北】B)书面表达（计10分）
91.假如在英语课上，老师请你们就“Lucky oney (压岁钱)”这个话题分组进行讨论，
但你认为同学们对“Hobbies (爱好）”更感兴趣，建议老师更换话题。请你根据下面的提示和要求，写一篇发言稿，谈一谈你的理由。
提不：(1) Why do you like talking about hobbies?
(2) What’s your reason for not talking about lucky oney?
要求：（1)发言稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
词数：60〜80。
参考词汇：one’s own hobby, a proper topic (合适的话题)，personal, unhappy
I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky oney. It is
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【答案】
One possible version
I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky oney. It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his own hobby，like playing ball gaes, listening to usic，drawing and so on. It can bring us pleasure and ake us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about it.
Lucky oney, however, isn’t a proper topic for us, because it’s too personal. What’s ore, not all of us can get lucky oney. Soe ay feel unhappy if we talk about it.
So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.
【2013广西玉林】七、书面表达（共15分）
丰富多彩的课外活动(after-class activities)可以充实校园生话，减轻学习压力.同学们还可以在活动中强身健体、在合作中增进友谊。请以“Our After-class Activities”为题，写一 两短文，介绍你们学校以及你本人参加课外活动的情况.
内容要点：1.学校开展丰富的课外活动：
2. ?天活动时间：下午4:20--5:20:
3.最喜爱的活动：
4. 交到更多朋友：
5. 从中学到更多东西，身体更健康.
参考词汇：
要求：1. 题目已给出，不计入总字数内.
2. 包括所有内容要点，用上所给参考词汇，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥。
3. 语句通顺，语法正确，80个词左右.
4. 文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在学校的名称.
【范文】
Our After-class Activities
We have all kinds of after-class activities in our school. They are colorful. We have after-class activities fro 4:20 p. to 5:20 p. everyday. We can do sports, play instruents, study English, and so on. y favorite activities are swiing and playing table tennis. I’ not the best, but I’ very happy when I beat y copanies. We can ake ore new friends here. And we can also learn ore fro each other. It’s iportant that playing sports can keep e fit. I like after-class activities very uch. What about you?
【2013广西南宁】 假如你叫李华，是“中华好少年”(China's Good Child)的候选人之一。请你写一份材料.介绍你在家里、在学校、在社会上(in society)的表现。
写作要求:1.词数在80词左右(开头已经给出，不计入总词数)；
2.短文中不能出现校名和人名，否则不得分;
3.所给的写作要点都必须用上；紧扣主题，适当发挥。
y nae is Li Hua. I a lucky to be chosen as one of China's Good Children.___________
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【范文】
y nae is Li Hua. I a lucky to be chosen as one of China's Good Children. I a a good boy in y hoe, I get up early everyday and do soe reading, then I do exercise. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help to train a person’s character. I often do soe housework at hoe.
At school, I study hard and do the hoework carefully. In class I often answer questions and after class, I often help the students with their lessons. In society, I often help the children. Give the books, war clothes, raise oney for charities. And on weekends, we can visit old people, spend tie with the and help the as uch as possible. Whenever and wherever, we can show our kindness.
【2013广西贺州】VI.书面表达。
最近，你们学校开展了以“中国梦，我的梦”为主题的活动，作为一名中学生应该有自己的梦想，你的梦想是什么呢？请你以“y Drea”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1.描述自己的梦想。
2.如何实现这个梦想。
3. 80词左右，可适当发挥，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、地名和校名等相关信息。
y Drea
Everyone has his drea. y drea is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to e and they often cheered e up. With the help of the, I was getting better. Now I’ very healthy. Since then I have hoped to becoe a doctor. In order to achieve y drea, I will study hard. I’ll give y love to the patients as uch as possible and help the out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think y drea will coe true one day.
【2013江苏徐州】书面表达(共20分)
假如你叫刘明(Liu ing)，你班上进行了“Is daily hoework necessary？”的分组讨论，你代表第五小组，向全班用英语汇报讨论结果。请你根据提示和要求，完成汇报稿。
提示：
Is daily hoework necessary?
Different students have different ideas.
三分之二的学生同意有助于理解，熟能生巧。
三分之一的学生不同意业余爱好时间少，疲劳，学习兴趣降低。
你的看法
(至少两点)
要求：1. 汇报内容包含三大要点：
①自我介绍：姓名、小组；
②讨论情况：不同学生有不同看法；
③你自己的看法：……
2. 以第一人称写；
3. 90词左右(已给出部分不计入总词数)。
注意：文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Class，
It is our turn to report.
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That's all. Thanks.
【答案】Dear Class
It is our turn to report.
I’ Liu ing. I’ in Tea Five. I’ll give a report about different ideas on daily hoework. Two thirds of students think hoework is necessary. They say practice akes perfect. While one third of students disagree. They think hoework took the too uch tie. They have little tie for their hobbies. They often feel tired and less interested on study. In y opinion, daily hoework is necessary for students. But they shouldn’t be too uch. They can iprove our skills. It ight be soe extensive reading, a paper or even just a gae. It should leave enough freedo to us so we could do things we really like to do. That’s all. Thanks.
【2013江苏淮安】七、书面表达(共20分)
随着家庭生活条件的提高, 现在的孩子或多或少会有一些零花钱。请以How to Spend Our Pocket oney为题写一段话, 内容必须包括以下提示要点, 词数在80－100之间。
1. 你从哪里得到零花钱；
2. 你平常用零花钱做些什么(至少两点)；
3. 你觉得用零花钱还可以做些什么更有意义的事(至少两点)。
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名：
2. 的标题和开头已付出, 不计入总词数。
How to Spend Our Pocket oney
As failies are now living a better life, we kids can have soe pocket oney ________________________________________________________________________
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How to Spend Our Pocket oney
As failies are now living a better life, we kids can have soe pocket oney. I usually get y pocket oney fro y parents. Soeties, I can get soe by selling waste paper and bottles. I often use y pocket oney to buy breakfast on y way to school. I also buy soe books to help e with y lessons with y pocket oney. I think I can do soething ore eaningful. For exaple, I can go travelling to a tourist attraction to enjoy yself in the suer holidays. I can also donate y pocket oney to help poor children in western areas of China so that they can live happily.
【2013 湖北黄冈】第三节书面表达（1 题，满分10 分）
俗话说：“予人玫瑰，手留余香”。在我们的日常生活中，我们会遇到各种困难，因此，我们会需要他人的帮助；但同时，我们也要学会帮助他人。其实，帮助他人就是在帮助自己。请你结合身边的事例，以“帮助”为话题，用英语写一篇短文。
注意： ①无需写标题，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
②文中要结合你帮助别人或别人帮助你的•一件事例；
③文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息；
④词数为80 左右。
As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will eet with a lot of trouble.
(参考答案) One possible version
So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble. I still reeber I helped one of y classates with his English when we were in the first ter of Junior Eight. Li Hua, one of y classates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked e to help hi. So fro then on, whenever he had probles, he would ask e, and I was patient to explain the to hi. Slowly, his English iproved with y help. At the sae tie, I found y English iproved too.
Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.
【2013山东潍坊】八、写作
当前我国政府正致力于建设“节约型”社会，倡导节约，抵制浪费。作为学生我们也能做些力所能及的事情，如步行或骑自行车上学;随手关水、断电;减少物品的使用和废旧物品的回收、再利用等。请根据要求和提示完成主题为How to Save的海报，号召更多的人，加人到“节约”的行动中来。开头、结尾已给出，不什人总词数。
要求:1.50词左右2.文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
提示:tap(水龙头), uneaten food/leftovers(剩余饭菜)
How to Save
Our governent is aiing to build an “econoized society”. I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.
One possible version:
Our governent is aiing to build an “econoized society” . I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve the goal. As students, we still can do soething to help.
First, don’t waste things. We’d better go to school on food or ride a bike instead of taking a car or a bus. Turn off the lights as soon as we leave the classroo. Reeber to turn off the tap at once after washing our hands. When we go out to eat in an restaurant, ask for saller dishes and take leftover hoe. Before we buy soething new, think whether it is necessary.
Next, use things as long as possible. When we buy things, ake sure they last a long tie. Don’t use a paper cup or a paper bag. It’s better to use a china cup or a lunch box. Because you can use the again.
Finally, collect what can be recycled in your classroo or in your neighbourhood and sell the. You should also buy things fro recycled aterial.
In a word, I think , one thing we should keep in ind no atter what a sall effort we can ake, it do ake a difference.
体裁：应用文。
试题分析：
认真要求，列出如下提纲。
1. 节约减排，低碳环保。
2. 让有限的资源延长生命，尽可能的少用一次性物品，节约用纸。
3. 尽可能的收集可再回收，利用的物品。使用购买回收的材料制作的物品。
时态：一般现在时。
规律总结：写应用文时，一定要认真要求，列出提纲。提纲应包括要点和时态，以免漏掉要点把握不住时态。同时，也不要被要点束缚，呆板地翻译要点，而应该适当发挥，机动灵活地把要点的意思表达出来。
【2013辽宁鞍山】VIII.书面表达(20分)
目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议.80词
左右。
一、原因:I.考试太多: 2.白身勤奋不够; 3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上:4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴.
二、你的看法与建议。
At present, a nuber of iddle school students have picked up a bad habit—cheating in exainations.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
VIII. At present, a nuber of iddle school students have picked up a bad habit — cheating in exainations.
There are four ain reasons. First, schools have given students too any exas, soe of which are too difficult. Second, soe students are not hard—working and they don’t work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of tie playing gaes or surfing the Internet. So they haven’t enough tie to prepare for the exas. Finally, students have to do so to ake their teachers and parents happy.
In y opinion, cheating in exas does great har to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we iprove our study and ake progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exas and ore tie to study for ourselves.
B. 【2013江苏扬州】写作 (计20分)
81. 随着年龄的增长，我们的课外活动领域会扩大，关注点也会增多。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以y After-School Activities为题举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。
活 动关注点
以 前1. 看电视；
2. ……自己。
现 在1. 和家长交流；
2. 做志愿者；
3. ……家庭、……
我们在成长，我们应该……
要求：1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2) 必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3) 词数：100词左右(征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
y After-School Activities
As we grow, both our after-school activities and what we care about are becoing ore and ore.
In the past, I ______________________________________________________________
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One possible version:
y After-School Activities
As we grow, both our after-school activities and what we care about are becoing ore and ore.
In the past, I often watched TV or played coputer gaes at hoe. Soeties I went out to play football with y friends. And I only cared about y own feeling and never cared about others.
But now, I often have a counication with y parents, and let the know what I think and what I want to do. And now I a a volunteer. I often help people in need. I don’t think only about yself, but about others. This ade e feel happy.
We are growing up. We should think ore about others, not only about ourselves. We should do soe eaningful things.
【2013江苏盐城】书面表达
假设你是江华，下周一你所在班级将举行英语课外阅读交流会。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。向同学们介绍The Faous Rabbit-Tortoise Race 这一故事。
Rabbitwin the second race
be good at running
TortoiseWin the third race
swi across the river
take turns to put … on the back
reach… together
What I have learned; …
要求：
1.必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.词数：90词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）。
We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise.
One possible version
We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise. The rabbit paid ore attention to their second race, he didn’t sleep at all in it. At last he won the race because he was good at running.
Today the rabbit and the tortoise had the third race. At first the rabbit ran faster than the tortoise, shortly after there was a wide river ahead it. The rabbit had no idea how to cross the river, the tortoise got to the river bank, too. He put the rabbit on his back, they swa across the river. They reached the finishing line at last.
I can learn the spirit of the teawork fro the story. If we help each other, the world will be ore beautiful.
【2013广东湛江】(满分20分)
初三毕业在即，你班将组织一次课外活动。假如你是班长，请根据正面内容，用英文写一篇80词左右的活动计划。
内容要点:
1. 下星期天早上8点在校门口集合，下午2点返回；
2. 坐公交车前往寸金公园(Cunjin Park);
3. 唱歌、跳舞、野餐、与老师合影；
4. 带齐食物、饮料等；
5. 注意安全和防火。
要求：1. 包含所给出要点，可适当发挥；
2. 不里逐词翻译，词数约80字左右。(开头不计入词数)
3. 文中不能出现考生的直实姓名、校名和共他真实信息。
参考词汇：at the school gate(学校门O)；activity(活动); keep away fro fire (远离火灾)
Our class is going to have a picnic in Cunjin Part next Sunday._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Our class is going to have a picnic in Cunjin Part next Sunday. We are going to eet at the school gate at 8:00 on Sunday orning. And we will be back at 2:00p... We plan to take a bus to Cunjin Park. We will have any activities there, for exaple, singing, dancing, having picnic and taking photos with our teachers. I’ sure we will have a lot of fun. I will ask y classates to take plenty of food and drink. We should pay attention to the safety. And we ust keep away fro fire all the tie.
【2013山东菏泽】书面表达（满分20分）
亲爱的同学.你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了了.请你以"y English study为题
谈一下三年来学习英语的心得体会。
1、要点包括:你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的办法以及学习感悟。
2,字数要求: 不少于80字。
y English Study
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【答案】参考范文:
y English Study
How tie flies! y three-year iddle school life will be over soon. Looking back. I have any eories of y English study.
When I entered the iddle school, I had so any difficulties with y English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn't aster the words and phrases. For a tie I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and y classates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke English as uch as possible. Step by step I ade great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
【评分说明】
1、本题为开放性试题，所提供范文仅供参考;在符合题目要求的前提下.允许考生自
由发挥。
2、本题共20分.评分可分为四个档次:
第一档: 符合本题写作要求.短文通顺完整.书本没有语法、拼写错误。书写工整.得17-20分;
第二档: 符合本题写作要求，短文基本通顺完整.有少量语法、拼写错误，书写较工整，
得13-16分;
第三档: 基本符合本题写作要求.但短文不够通顺完整，语法、拼写错误较多，书写不
够工整。得10-12分;
第四档: 通篇语句不通.表达不清.且书写非常潦草，得10分以下。
【2013浙江宁波】X.书面表达（共15分）
近来，“光盘行动(Clean Plate Capaign)”悄然流行，提倡“节约型社会（econoized society）”已成共识。请你根据下列表格中的信息，用英语为某英语报社写一篇短文，谈谈作为一名中学生，在日常生活中应该如何勤俭节约、反对浪费，并作简要评论。
What to do What not to do
◆turn off the light
◆save as uch paper as possible
◆…◆not use one-off chopsticks(一次性筷子)
◆not spend oney buying unnecessary things
◆…
注意：（1）短文须包括上述要点，应适当增加细节，以使行为连贯。
（2）词数：80词左右，短文的标题和开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
Let’s start with the things around us!
Recently, the “Clean Plate Capaign” has been very popular with any people. Our governent is doing its best to build an econoized society.
As a iddle school student, I think ______________
【答案】
One Possible Version
Let’s start with the things around us!
Recently, the “Clean Plate Capaign” has been very popular with any people. Our governent is doing its best to build an econoized society.
As a iddle school student, I think we should join in the capaign. We can start the things around us. Firstly, ake sure that the lights are turned off when we finish our work and leave the roo. Secondly, we can save as uch paper as possible. Thirdly, it is iportant for us to for the habit of turning off the tap after it is used. What’s ore, we ust not spend oney buying unnecessary things. When we eat, we’d better not use one—off chopsticks and we ustn’t waste food.
In a word, saving energy is very iportant. Let’s work together fro now on!(97words)