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2013-2014学年度中考二轮复习提纲专项练习
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
题号一总分
得分
一、书面表达
1．健康对我们来说非常重要, 我们有很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示，以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇80个词左右的短文，倡议“健康生活”，从三个方面说明如何保持健康。短文首句已给出，不记入总词数, 可适当发挥。
1.food a balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less eat…
2.exercise do ore exercise, take a walk, play ball gaes…
3.happiness keep happy, ake friends, sile…
2．大千世界，无奇不有。相信同学们也遇到过这类谎言、骗局或谣言。假设你叫李明，是红星（Hongxing）中学九（1）班的学生，请你写一篇发言稿。内容包括：
自我介绍；
描述一次类似的经历，并说说你当时的感受；
以后再经历这样的事，作为学生，我们该怎么做？请提出两个建议或做法。
要求：
不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；
语句连贯，次数在80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总次数。
Good orning, everyone! Let e introduce yself first._____________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________
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That’s all. Thank you.
3．假如你是ary 的班主任老师，ary把她的困惑告诉了你。请根据以下信息，你给ary提出几点建议。（不少于70词）
应该做的事情
1.上课专心听讲，按时完成作业；
2.每周至少参加两次体育活动；
3.友好地和同学们相处；
4.周末好好休息；
5.做一些自己喜欢的事情；
6.可以多读一些好书
不应该做的事情
1.不要和父母吵架；
2.周末不要上太多的课程；
3..不要过多的上网，少打游戏。
希望
平时更好地和父母、老师交流；
要求：1.包含所有表格内容，可适当发挥；
2.开头已给出不计入总词数。
Here is y advice
4．大多数中学生认为校园生活是丰富多彩的，学习是快乐有趣的。然而，无论在城市
还是农村学校都有一些厌学的学生。请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你的看法。
要求：（1）内容包括 ① 中学生厌学的主要原因。
② 你对该现象的看法。
（2）字数：60-80词。
（3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
5．假定上周六晚上，你们全家在一家饭店就餐。请你根据以下要点提示．用英语写一篇短文，描述事情发生的经过，并适当加以评论。
要点提示：
(1)邻桌年轻人大声说笑、吸烟。
(2)你请他们不要那样做。
(3)他们不听，反而嘲笑你。
(4)你认为：①他们在公共场所那样做是不对的。
②年轻人是天津的未来，应该……
参考词汇：嘲笑laugh at
要求：
(1)词数：80～100个。
(2)短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Last Saturday evening, all y faily had dinner in a restaurant. ____________________
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6．请用英语表述一下内容。
要点如下：
本周六是王洪的生日，许多同学将去她家参加生日聚会。
王洪爱好广泛，为人友善；经常帮父母做家务。
一些同学打算向父母要钱买礼物送给她。
你对同学们花钱买礼物一事的看法及理由。
要求：1.不要逐字翻译。
2.词数：60-80。
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7．根据内容提示，写出不少于60个单词的短文。
假设你对服装很感兴趣，要从事服装设计，针对不同人适合穿什么服装谈谈你的看法。
可包含以下内容：1 穿合适服装的重要性； 2 不同职业穿不同的衣服； 3你设计服装会怎么做？
8．研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表提示内容，写一篇英语短文。
听音乐前的情绪状态适用音乐听音乐后的心境
压力大，过分焦虑流行音乐放松
沉迷电脑游戏，兴奋过度乡村音乐平静
困倦.疲劳摇滚音乐振奋
孤独.悲伤（考生自拟）（考生自拟）
注意：
1.词数80左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数；
2.内容必须包括上表中的要点；
3.条理清楚.语句连续；
4.文中不得出现真实的地名.校名和人名等信息。
（参考词汇：摇滚音乐rock usic）
Research has shown that usic has an iportant effect on one’s oods.
9．你班上周举行了关于是否缩短寒暑假并增加春秋假的讨论，同学们各抒己见。请你根据下表中的讨论记录，结合你自己对此事的看法，用英语给校报写一篇短文。
赞成目前学期长而枯燥，学生无法充分休息
春秋两季风景优美，学生可以感受自然
反对一年分成四个学期，影响学习效果
作业可能因此变多，家中学习压力
你的观点。。。。。（至少一点）
注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称
2.结构完整，语言通顺，意思清楚，连贯，书写规范
3.词数不少于90。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
We had a discussion about whether to shorten the suer and winter holidays and add the spring and autun holidays lat week. Opinions are different.
Soe students think____________________________________________________________
10．某中文网站提出 “走路去上学” 的倡议，请你就这一话题写一篇约70词的英语短文。
内容提示：1. 走路有利于健康且安全；
2. 和同学结伴可以相互了解，相互帮助；
3. 不需要父母接送，学会自理；
4. 道路上车辆减少，城市不再拥堵；
……
要求：1. 要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名，否则不予评分。
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：be good for , each other , send , no longer, crowded
Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise.
11．现在是周六上午九点，我们来看看Ji 一家正在做什么呢? 请根据表格内容提示，写一篇短文. 可适当发挥，60―80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数内。
PeopleActivity
JiWriting a letter
FatherWashing the car
otherCleaning the roo
SisterDoing hoework
Grandparentsaking food
It’s 9 o’clock on Saturday orning no
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12．提示：假如你叫王明，是七年级一班的一个学生。上周五晚上，你所在的班级举行 了一场英语派对（an English party)。在派对上，大家尽情地唱歌、跳舞、表演节目、做 游戏等。你的老师们也参加了这次派对并表演了节目，师生们一起度过了一段美好的时 光。 请根据提示内容，以A Wonderful English Party为题写一篇书面表达。 注意：1、短文中不能出现真实的班级、姓名等信息； 2、使用提示内容中提供的信息，并可以适当发挥；
3、书写规范，注意大小写和标点符号；
4、书面表达内容不少于60个单词。
A Wonderful English Party
13．同学们，在刚才的答题过程中，大家已经和欣赏了诗歌、书评、杂志专栏、新闻、 寓言、科普故事等不同的材料。著名作家Francis Bacon曾说过：“ Reading akes a full an.”可见，对于每个人的成长都有着举足轻重的作用。请你根据以下信息提示，结合自己的观点，以“Reading akes a Full an” 为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，表达你对阅读的看法和计划。
要求：句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯。
14．为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以"安全为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。
注意：1)内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥；
2)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3)词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：be careful, on line, danger, call...for, go bad
How to keep safe?
As teenagers we should always keep safety in ind. But how can we keep safe? Here are soe of y suggestions.
First, _________________________________________________________________________
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15．假设你是一名来自雅安的中学生李红,今年14 岁, 暑假你将参加学校组织的赴北京的夏令营活动。请你用英语写一篇在开营仪式上的自我介绍发言稿。请将该发言稿写在答题卡相应的位置上。词数 60 - 90。发言稿还包括以下要点:
1. 你爱好画画;
2. 课余时间你喜欢野营,喜欢在大自然中画植物,聆听鸟儿的歌唱;
3. 你最喜欢的科 目是科学,希望长大以后成为一名科学家;
4. 你很高兴参加夏令营,希望你们能成为好朋友。
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16．请你根据下表中所提供的信息以“Learn to express thanks”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
背 景1.认为上中学时吃好穿好是应该的；
2.走向社会后没有感恩意识。
学会感恩1.感谢社会提供良好的教育机会；
2.感谢父母供养自己上学；
3.感谢老师传授知识；
4.感谢朋友的支持与鼓励。
参考词汇：enter society 进入社会， sense of thanks 感恩意识， behavior 行为
要求：1.短文应包括所提供的所有内容，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；
2.演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露你个人身份的信息；
3.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good orning, boys and girls!
The topic of y speech today is “Learn to express thanks”.______________________________________________
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In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to ake our world ore beautiful.
Thank you for your listening!
17．今天是父亲节。假定你是李华，请给你的美国朋友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：
●表述你与父亲间的情感；
●为父亲制作二张卡片；
●帮助父亲做点事；
●陪父亲散步等。
注意：1. 词数80-100；
2．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
It's Father's Day today. It's a special day, isn't it? __________________________________________________________
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What' your plan for Father's Day? I' looking forward to hearing fro you.
Yours,
Li Hua
18．根据提示，请以“ School Rules”为题， 写一篇短文：每所，学校都有规章制度 。下面是你们学校的一些规章制度，请你向一位新生ary作一下介绍。内容包括：
1. 上课不能迟到。
2. 教室要保持(keep)干净和安静。
3. 见到老师要问好。（greet)
4. 不允许在教室里吃东西。
5. 不许在课堂上听音乐，玩游戏。
6. 不要损害花草树木。（pick flowers; clib trees）
要求：意思连贯、语句通顺。70词左右。
19．昨天是奶奶的生日，以An interesting birthday party为题…
提示词：1. birthday , yesterday , orning
2. go, the shop, buy , presents,
3. go , see, presents , have a good tie .
4. go hoe until , nine o’clock , evening.
An interesting birthday party
20．当前，全市各学校正开展“好书伴我成长”活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表格中所给信息，以“Growing up with good books” 为题，用英语写一篇100-120词的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。
读书的益处获取知识，增长见识，使人快乐。
存在的现象听音乐，看电视，上网，占用了大部分业余时间。
发出倡议多读书，读经典好书。向世界传播中国传统文化。
让读书成为我们生活的一部分
要求：
1.倡议书应包括所有要点；
2.倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Growing up with good books
y dear friends,
Reading is very iportant. _____________________________________________________________________________
21．假设你是李明，本周班会上， 你将代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次敬老院的公益活动。
要点如下：
星期天早上8：30在校门口集合，乘公共汽车前往；
给老人们赠送班级礼物；
打扫卫生，整理房间；
唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、聊天，给老人们带去快乐；
活动很有意放，希望积极参与；
注意：
次数60 --- 80， 书面表达的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
1. chat v. 聊天 2. eaningful adj. 有意义的 3. cheer up 使……高兴
22．假设你班为了配合创建“宜居城市”，最近以“Life in the future ：for better or worse?”为题进行了一次讨论。许多同学对未来表示乐观，但也有一些同学对未来有些担心。请你根据下列表格中的内容要点提示，用英语写一篇短文。
乐观者的观点1.世界变得更好
2.生活水平提高
3.人的寿命更长
担心者的观点1.世界变得更挤
2.环境问题更多
3.能源变得更少
你自己的观点考生自拟（至少两点）
注意：
1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺;
3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇： 水平、标准standard n.； 观点、看法opinion
Life in the future：for better or worse?
any students are optiistic(乐观的)about the next fifty years.__________________
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23．请以"y last holiday"为题，写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. Where did you go?
2. When did you go?
3. How did you get there?
4. How long did you spend there?
5. What did you do or see?
6. What was it like?
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24．安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。
提示： 1. 体育锻炼
2. 上下楼梯
3. 交朋结友
4. 食品卫生
要求： 1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯；
2．短文可以适当发挥；但要包含以上要点。
3．词数：80―100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Safety has becoe the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially iportant to us students.___________ _____________________________________________
25．新学期你认识了一个新朋友叫Tina Green，请根据所给内容，作适当发挥后，写一篇关于她的60字左右的介绍短文。(10分)
Nae
Age
sexNationality
(国籍)
schooldinnerCollection
Hobbies（爱好）
Tina
Green14girl EnglishNo.1 iddle School西红柿，鸡肉和水果9 baseballs
…
4 volleyballs
I have a new friend .
26．近期，我国一名中学生随父母旅游时，在埃及一著名景点文物上刻写“××到此一游”，此事经媒体曝光后，在国内引起极大反响。作为一名中学生，你就“如何文明旅游”这一话题，谈谈自己的看法。
提示：1、旅游中不文明的陋习，如……；
2、文明意识和行为，如……；
3、词数80左右（首句已给出，不计算在总词数之内）。
Nowadays, traveling is becoing a ore and ore iportant part of our life._________
27．刘伟，无臂钢琴演奏者。他十岁时在一次意外中失去双臂，但他并没有放弃成为一名钢琴家的梦想。经过刻苦用脚练习弹琴，他最终在“中国达人秀”（China’s Got Talent）的舞台上实现了自己的梦想。请根据以上内容写一篇英语短文。
要求：
简要描述刘伟的经历；
谈谈从他的经历中得到的启示；
词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Liu Wei, an arless piano player, has a very special experience.
28．很快就要初中毕业了，中考完后每个人都有自己的计划或者愿望。下课时，有几位同学谈了自己的想法，有人想学习，有人想旅游，你又有什么想法呢？请根据提示写一篇短文介绍一下吧：
Ji以前很忙，没有时间玩，想去北京旅游放松一下，并且学习更多中国历史。
Ay对电脑感兴趣，考完试后去学习电脑, 这样能在电脑上做很多事情。
You ……
提示词：used to travel learn ore about… after the exa hope
要求：1）所有提示词都应用上，语言运用准确得当，句子通顺，表达符合语言逻辑，可发挥适当想像，字数80左右。
2）不得出现真实姓名及所在学校名称等个人相关信息。
29．书面表达
请以“y drea”为题写一篇英语作文，供英语课上交流。
DreaI want to
Reasonsbe interested in
…
Ways to achieves y dreawork hard at school
find out how successful people did it
…
注意：1、短文必须包括三部分内容，需要陈述理由（2条）和方式（3条）
2、表中右栏信息仅供参考，也可自由发挥；
词数80个左右
30．埃及千年神庙惊现中文涂鸦“丁 ××到此一游”。此事曝光后，引起国内外广泛关注，某国外英语网站就此发起讨论。请你以一名中国中学生（网名Whitecloud） 的身份，跟帖发表自己的看法。
要点提示：
1.表明身份；
2. 发表看法；
3. 你的行动
要求：
1. 词数：80词左右， 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
31．据报道，从2011年开始上海、宁波等地个别学校进行了电子书包试点。这是否预示电子书将全面推广？它对学生的学习会有什么影响？就此，你班同学发起了一次主题为“E-Books, Good or Bad?”的讨论，假如你叫陈华，请你给某英文报社写一封信，介绍一下讨论的情况及你自己的观点。
赞成反对
环保，节约纸张，不会过多砍伐树木长时间使用对眼睛有害
美观、小巧，便于携带，便于查找资料不能直接在书上做笔记
可以在无光的环境下阅读被一些学生用来玩游戏
注意：1、开头部分已写好，只需接着写,不计入字数总数。
2、可适当增加讨论话题时经常用到的话语，使所写内容连贯。
3、所写内容必须包括上面表格全部信息。
4、短文词数：80个左右。
Dear Editor,
I’ writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about whether e-books are good or bad?___________________________________________________________________________
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Yours truely,
Chen Hua
32．书面表达（满分20分）
假如你叫刘明，你班进行了“Is daily hoework necessary?” 的分组讨论，你代表第五小组，向全班用英语汇报讨论结果。请你根据提示和要求，完成汇报稿。
Is daily hoework necessary?
Different students have different ideas.
三分之二的学生同意有助于理解，熟能生巧。
三分之一的学生不同意业余爱好时间少，疲劳，学习兴趣降低。
你的看法（至少两点）
要求：
汇报内容包含三大要点：
①自我介绍：姓名、小组；
②讨论情况：不同学生有不同看法；
③你自己的看法：……
以第一人称写；
90词左右（已给出的部分不计入总词数）
注意: 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
33．书面表达（本大题共10分）
假设学校戏剧俱乐部正在举办“奥斯卡影片欣赏月”活动，上周播放的影片是《少年派》。请据此在答题卡指定的位置上写一篇80词左右的英文观后感。内容提示如下：
1.影片由李安（Ang Lee）执导， 他因此片获最佳导演奖。
2.影片讲述了一个名叫派（Pi）的年轻人的故事，他独自乘小船出行；
3. 他要应付恶劣的天气，还要找到足够的食物，最终安全返回。
4.观后感想。
注意：
1.观后感须包括所给的内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
2. 第4要点的内容须用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥。
3.观后感的开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数。
34．根据要求完成大作文，词数：８０词左右．（共１５分）．
根据辽宁省政府减轻中小学生课业负担的要求，各市教育局已经调整了学生上下学的时间，这使学生们的生活发生了一系列变化。请根据下列表格中的提示，用英语写一篇。
在校时间作业时限假日安排课外活动
过 去…………周末和节假日补课少而乏味
现 在不超过7个半小时不超过1个半小时不补课，做自己喜欢做的事。丰富多彩，如：郊游，文体活动，做家务等。
你的看法……
要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
2.的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3.内容必须包括表格中的要点,可以适当发挥。
4.参考词汇：have extra classes，after-school activities, few and boring, colorful.
Great changes have taken place since the governent of Liaoning did soething to reduce the students’ studying pressure.
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35．假如你是小李，你的一位美国笔友Andrew想来中国旅游，来信咨询你乘飞机或火车旅行的利弊。请根据下面表格内容，以从青岛到广州为例，写信简述你的观点。
注意：词数100左右。
交通工具飞机火车
价 格1200元550元
旅游时间2小时23小时
优 点舒适……便宜，可以观光views
缺 点……耗时，拥挤，疲劳
Dear Andrew,
Yours
Xiao Li
参考答案
1．
Good Ways to Keep Healthy
It is very iportant for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy?
First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less eat. Different kinds of foods are necessary, it’s also iportant to eat a balanced diet.
Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends. We should try to do ore exercise every day.
Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to ake friends, it is a good way to keep us happy. If you sile often, you also feel happy. So, be happy to be healthy. (127words)
【解析】本题是围绕健康展开叙述，本题已经给出主要写作要点，写作中注意从三个方面进行论述。在写作时，本文的主语可以用第一，二人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。应该尽量包括文中提示的内容，可稍加拓展。内容上应注意描述的全面性，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
2．
面对谎言
Good orning, everyone! Let e introduce yself first. y nae is Li ing, a student fro Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing iddle School. Yesterday afternoon, the student on duty said he had to see the doctor. I offered to do the cleaning for hi. Later I found hi playing basketball on the playground. I was quite unhappy. He didn’t tell the lie. I would do the duty for hi if he asked.
As students, we should always tell the truth even if others ight not agree with us. When others tell lies, we’d better ake the understand that honesty is the best policy.
That’s all. Thank you. (95 words)
面对骗局
Good orning, everyone! Let e introduce yself first.y nae is Li ing, a student fro Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing iddle School. Last year, I received a chain letter saying that only kind people could receive the letter. If I sent if to as any people as possible, I would get good luck. But if I didn’t , I would die the next day. I was so scared that I sent it to soe of y friends.
As students, we shouldn’t forward such chain letters. If we don’t know how to deal with the, we’d better ask our teachers or parents for help.
That’s all. Thank you.(95 words)
面对谣言
Good orning, everyone! Let e introduce yself first.y nae is Li ing, a student fro Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing iddle School. I heard a ruor of the sae kind this year. It is said that a Chinese edicine called Banlangen could kill the flu of H7N9 or soe diseases like that. So it was sold out in our city very soon. I thought it was so silly and I didn’t believe it at all. I would rather ask the doctor for advice than buy the edicine.
As students, we should keep cal when we face such ruors. Besides, we shouldn’t believe or spread the.
That’s all. Thank you.(98 words)
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文,写一篇发言稿介绍自己的一次经历,并针对自己的经历提出两点建议。结合本文题材可知,写作中首先要对自己的情况简要介绍,并注意用语的礼貌性,如开头对听众进行问候,结尾表达谢意等.结合材料内容,可知本文时态涉及过去,现在和将来三种时态,注意时态和时间状语的一致问题。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词,注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
3．
Here is y advice:
The right thing to do
1. Listen attentively in class, finish your hoework on tie.
2. Take part in the physical activity for at least two ties a week;
3. Get on well with your classates;
4. Have a good rest over the weekend;
5. Do soething you like;
6. You can read soe good books.
Should not be doing
1. Don't quarrel with your parents;
2. On the weekend, don't take too any courses;
3. Don't spend too uch tie on the Internet, playing video gaes.
I think you’d better counicate with parents, teachers at ordinary ties;
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，以老师的名义给玛丽写一封信,并就她面临的问题提出几点建议。题目中给出的材料较为齐全。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题,注意不要遗漏要点，注意文后要适当提出自己的建议。时态一般应该用一般现在时，祈使句和should句型用的较多。由于本文主要是来提出建议,故叙述中可以借助于序数词.
考点：提纲类作文
点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。
4．
范文：
ost students believe that the life in school is colorful and interesting. However, there are still soe students feeling tired of learning both in cities and countries.
Concerning the proble, the reasons are listed belo To begin with, they dislike the way that their teachers sho Besides, there is a lot of hoework to do so they are stressed out. In addition, they feel bored about the courses.
Fro y point of view, students should be focused on study. As the saying goes “Study hard and you will ake progress.”
Concerning the proble, the reasons are listed belo To begin with, they dislike the way that their teachers sho Besides, there is a lot of hoework to do so they are stressed out. In addition, they feel bored about the courses.
Fro y point of view, students should be focused on study. As the saying goes “Study hard and you will ake progress.”
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。题目中给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应认真阅读要点，根据要点组织材料，确定写作内容。写作中做注意结合自己实际，认真谈谈中学生的厌学原因，这部分重点写，然后谈谈自己对这个问题的看法。注意不要遗漏要点，适当发挥。结合材料可知本文主要是第三人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。注意情态动词should后面动词用原形。适当使用连词，序数词，注意从句的应用，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
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Last Saturday evening, all y faily had dinner in a restaurant. We were enjoying ourselves when soething disturbing happened. A group of young people were sitting at the table nearby. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and soked cigarettes, aking the restaurant full of noise and soke. I tried to stop the doing so, but they refused to listen to e. Instead, they said it was none of y business and laughed at e.
In fact, what they did upset e deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In y opinion, one should keep quite and not affect others when in public. Therefore it’s copletely bad behavior to do that in the restaurant. What’s ore, we should always watch our anners and pay attention to public orality, as young people are the future of Tianjin.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较简略，故动笔前要认真阅读材料，根据材料组织内容，适当发挥，不能遗漏要点。写作中注意重点介绍事情的发生经过，并对此评论，表达自己的看法。根据材料内容可知本文在叙述事情经过时，应用一般过去时态。表达观点时，可用一般现在时态或者将来时态。本文人称较为复杂，注意时态语与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
6．
Wang Hong is a friendly girl and has a lot of hobbies. She often helps her parents with the housework. It’s her birthday this Saturday. any classates will go to her hoe for her birthday party. Soe of the will ask their parents for soe oney to buy her gifts. But I don’t think it’s a good idea, because that’ll cost our parents’ oney. I’ going to ake a birthday card for her by yself. I’ sure she’ll like it.
【解析】
试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是花钱为同学买礼物好不好。本题所给材料较为简略，故动笔前一定要认真阅读材料，根据材料内容确定人称，时态等问题。内容上应注意描述的全面性，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。
7．
I a very interested in designing clothes . As we all known , soe good cloth can ake you look like beautiful . But different people should be wearing different styles
. In y opinion the youth should be wearing light to show he is full of energy and lively.the adult should be wearing the fir in order to show he is a successful an . Finally the old should be wearing the deep color cloth . So if you wear clothes in suitable ways you will becoe ore beautiful
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求写一篇介绍自己对服装设计的看法。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，注意从三个方面进行叙述。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的来。
8．
One possible version:
Research has shown that usic has an iportant effect on one’s oods. So people use different kinds of usic to change oods. If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop usic. After you listen to it, you will feel relaxed. Soe of the students are crazy about coputer gaes and feel over excited, they can listen to country usic. After listening to it, they will feel cal and peaceful. Soe people feel tired and sleepy, they can listen to rock usic. After they listen to it, they will feel excited. Soeties I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to disco usic, after I listen to it, I feel happy again. usic is so wonderful. I like it very uch.
【解析】本题要求写一篇音乐的议论文。本题所给材料较为详细，故动笔前先要认真阅读材料，确定写作内容。写作中主要将各种情绪状态及适合的音乐介绍清楚。结合语境可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，人称问题较为复杂，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。
9．略
【解析】试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈关于假期的问题。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多，注意将提示的要点表达清楚，并发表自己的观点。结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，人称问题较为复杂，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，如宾语从句，条件状语从句等。注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。¬
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Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise. I think it’s good for health and it’s safe. When we walk with our classates, we can talk about soething interesting and know each other better. Also, we can help each other. What’s ore，if we walk, our parents don’t have to send us to school. We can learn to look after ourselves. As a result, there will be fewer cars in the city. Then the streets are no longer crowded. I hope ore and ore students will go to school on foot.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，写关于走路去上学的短语。本题所给材料较为详细，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。结合材料内容，可知本文主要用第一人称进行叙述，时态主要是一般现在时态。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上，为了让表达更符合逻辑，可以适当使用序数词；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
11．
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文以表格的形式给出了主要写作要点，写作中主要将这些要点表达清楚。根据要求可知本句主要是用现在进行时态进行叙述，人称问题比较复杂，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
考点：提纲类作文
点评:该题型主要考查学生的语言表达能力，在写作中根据所给提示和语言信息，不遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。做到表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯
12．
A Wonderful English Party
Hi! y nae is Wang ing. I’ a student of Class One, Grade Seven. Last Friday evening we had an English party, it was wonderful.
At the party, we had a good tie. Li Lei sang soe songs, Lin Tao danced to disco. ary perfored ballet, and y friend Kangkang perfored Chinese Kong Fu. ichael perfored agic tricks. y teachers cae to our party, too. r. Wang sang an English song, and y Chinese teacher recited a Chinese poe. We played the usical Chairs gae, too. Everyone was happy.
We had a good tie, we enjoyed ourselves very uch.
【解析】
试题分析；这是一篇给材料作文，介绍你一次英语聚会。结合所给材料，可知本文主要用一般过去时态进行叙述，人称为单数第一三人称，句子结构主要为系表结构，主谓宾结构，注意运用所给短语。写作中注意叙述顺序，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。文中适当使用代词，注意避免句式的单调重复，避免单词及语法错误。
考点：记述文写作
点评：此类作文考查的是学生基础的写作能力，主要是一些基础句型的应用。平时学习中应注意对于一些常见句型句式的记忆，联系默写此类句型。对于一些比较经典的段落，有目的的进行背诵，考试作为参照。这尤其对于叙述的逻辑问题有很大的帮助。
13．
One possible version
Reading akes a Full an
Reading is very iportant in our life. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our inds but also ake us ore intelligent. Besides, reading is also one of the ost iportant ways to learn a foreign language like English.
Textbooks, newspapers, agazines and other kinds of reading aterials can help us know ore about the outside world and help us grow into an excellent person.
I’ planning to read at least 5 books in the coing holiday. And I’ll spend ore tie reading every day in y senior high school life. Reading akes a full an! Let’s start reading no
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在及将来时态，注意主谓一致及时间状语与时态的一致问题。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
14．
How to keep safe?
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in ind. But how can we keep safe? Here are soe
of y suggestions. First, we should be careful when we ake friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we ust call the police for help in tie so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do har to our health. Last but not least, suer is coing, and we ust reeber it's dangerous to swi in the river. In short, safety ust coe first !
【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文只给出了主要写作要点。写作中要注意从四个方面进行叙述，并自己补充一到两点。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。写作中注意使用连接词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系
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One Possible Version
Dear friends,
I’ very glad to introduce yself to you. y nae is Li Hong. I’ 14 years old. I live in Ya’an. I’ interested in drawing. In y free tie, I often go caping, draw soe pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature. y favourite subject is Science. I want to be a
scientist when I grow up.
I feel lucky to join you. I hope we can be good friends.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍自己的发言稿文。结合材料，可知本文要爱好，课外活动，理想方面进行介绍，并注意表达自己希望参加夏令营的愿望。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
16．
书面表达参考范文（一）：
Good orning, boys and girls!
The topic of y speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find soe students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks.
I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. The society offers us a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us uch knowledge, so we should thank the. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.
In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to ake our world ore beautiful.
Thank you for your listening!
书面表达参考范文（二）：
Learn to express thanks
Good orning, boys and girls!
The topic of y speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find ost iddle School students don’t show any sense of “Thanks”. They think that they are certain of eating well and wearing fashionable clothes.
As iddle School students, we should learn to express thanks. We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school. And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us uch knowledge. Besides, our friends always give us encourageent and help.
In a word, we are lucky in everything. But we should learn to express thanks. In the future, I should study harder to repay our parents and teachers. I should go to y friends to share their happiness and sadness.
Thank you for your listening!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇关于感恩的演讲稿。写作中注意将材料按照材料提示进行介绍，通过材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意使用连接词，做到语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。由于是演讲类作文，尤其注意应用一些常见句式、短语来提高我们的表达水平。
17．
Dear John,
It's Father's Day today. It's a special day, isn't it?
I think we should do soething to show our love for our fathers on this special day. y father and I are good friends. Whenever I eet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help e.
Today I will ake a beautiful card for hi, with y thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help hi wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening. Besides, I'll take a walk with hi after dinner and then play chess with hi, for he likes it very uch. I' sure he'll be very happy.
What's your plan for Father's Day? I' looking forward to hearing fro yon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一封电子邮件，介绍如何与父亲一起度过父亲节。材料中给的资料比较全面，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。结合材料可知本文主要用一般将来时态进行叙述，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
18．
School Rules
Welcoe to our school, ary. Here are soe of our school rules. Let e tell you: We can't arrive late for class. We can't talk loudly in class. We have to be quiet in class, and we have to keep our class clean. When we eet the teachers on the way, we ust greet the. We can't eat or drink in the classroo. But we can eat outside. We can't listen to usic or play gaes in class, either. We can't pick flowers or clib trees.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，向一位新生ary介绍学校的规章制度。题目中给出的材料较为齐全。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。为了使语言更显亲切,在写作时，本文的主语主要是用复数第一人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时态. 注意时间状语与时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯,适当使用连词。
考点：说明文写作
点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。
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It was October 12th yesterday. y friends held a birthday party for e. In the orning, they cae to y hoe early, and they brought any presents for e. I liked the very uch. I invited the to the KTV, we sang songs, danced and played gaes. About 5:30 p.., we went y hoe. y other had cooked a delicious dinner for us. After dinner, we watched TV and at about 8:30 p.. we ate birthday cake. There were fifteen candles on y birthday cake. I ade a silent wish, and then I blew the candles out in one breath. I had an interesting birthday party. We had a good tie in the party. I was so grateful to what they did for e.
【解析】
试题分析；这是一篇给材料作文，介绍奶奶的生日。动笔前先要先认真阅读提示单词，根据单词组织材料，确定写作内容。根据提示可知本文主要记述的是过去发生的事情，故时态主要是一般过去时态。人称为第一人称复数。句子结构主要为系表结构，主谓宾结构。写作中注意叙述顺序，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。文中适当使用代词，注意避免句式的单调重复，避免单词及语法错误。
考点：记述文写作
点评：此类作文考查的是学生基础的写作能力，主要是一些基础句型的应用。平时学习中应注意对于一些常见句型句式的记忆，联系默写此类句型。对于一些比较经典的段落，有目的的进行背诵，考试作为参照。这尤其对于叙述的逻辑问题有很大的帮助。
20．One possible version:
y dear friends,
Reading is very iportant. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our inds, but also ake us clever and happier. Our study can be iproved if we read ore good books. The ore we read, the ore we will learn, and the brighter our future will becoe.
However, soe students spend uch tie in listening to usic, watching TV or going on line to play gaes. It takes uch of their spare tie。So I would like to suggest that everyone should read ore books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let’s start reading no And let it becoe a part of our life!
【解析】首先我们应该注意的体裁是应用文，那就要注意应用文的写作特点和格式。其次要注意时态，用一般现在时态。再次要注意内容要点，不要有漏啦。最后要注意条理清晰，语言具有感染力。
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We will pay a visit to the old people’s hoe this Sunday. We’ll have to eet at the school gate at 8:30 on Sunday orning and then go there by bus. There we will do soe cleaning and tidy the roos. After that we will have any activities, such as singing, dancing, telling stories and chatting to cheer up the old. Before we leave, we’ll give our presents to the.
I hope all of us can take an active part. Through the eaningful activity, we can learn to care for the old.
【解析】
本题要求根据所给表格中所提供的信息，用英语写一个通知，将学生参加一次敬老院的公益活动的活动安排告知全班同学。本题给出大量的信息，包括活动时间、集合时间、出发时间以及返回时间；集合地点、活动地点；活动内容，及交通方式，注意将这些内容介绍清楚。写作中注意用词准确，逻辑清楚，并注意应用文题的格式，要求。
22．one possible version：
Life in the future：for better or worse?
any students are optiistic(乐观的)about the next fifty years．In fact，they think
that the world will be a better place than it is now and our lives will be greatly iproved．
As a result，people will have a higher standard of living and live longer．
However，other students are worried about the future．They say the world will
becoe ore crowded．Therefore，we will have even ore environental probles and
live in a world with less energy available．
But in y opinion，I think we will find ways to solve our probles and everyone will
live ore happily．
【解析】本文属于议论文，主体时态为一般现在时。写作时要用正确的句式表达出乐观者和担心者的观点，最后用自己的观点结束全文。
23．
On y last holiday went to Hawaii.y classates LiZhi wei,QinChangping and I.First day,went to the beach took a bus.The QinChangping pulled out to a stong Aerican and he won.The LZhiwei played volleyball with two beautiful Aerican girl but he lost.I swa with six sporsans.y saw was the best.
Next day.We saw a fil in a big cinea.We had lunch in a big hotel and ate lots of shashliks.There shashilks were very nice.Afternoon ,we went to graeyard of ZhangXue liang ,and took lots of photos.
Third day.We stayed 5 hours in the beach.We played bolleyball with seven beautiful Aerican girls.there were only us there boys ,so we won to the girls.Afternoon ,we bought any books of ZhangXueliang in there.The books were very nice.I a going to send y friends.
Next we took a plane to Beijing .I love Hawaii.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己的最后一个假期。本题所给材料比较简单，动词前先要阅读所给六个问题,对涉及问题都要有所回应。在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性,注意应用所给单词，短语。结合材料可知本文主要是一般过去时态，第一人称，注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。
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Safety has becoe the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially iportant to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too any students at school, and our hallways are too narro So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there ay be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away fro junk food, which is harful to our health.
In a word, it's iportant to reeber these for us all.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提示，可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述，注意围绕要点组织材料，适当发挥。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
25．
I have a new friend .Her nae is Tina Green. Her age is 14 years old .Her nationality is English. She is in the first high school .Her lunch is the toato、 chicken and fruit. Her collection is 9 baseballs and 4 volleyball. She likes playing baseballs and volleyball. We are good friends.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇短文，介绍自己的新朋友。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第三人称，时态为一般现在时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，适当使用连接词。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。日常学习中，注意多背诵范文，熟记一些经典句型，考试时就能有所参照，有的放矢。
26．One possible version:
Nowadays, traveling is becoing a ore and ore iportant part of our life. But soe travelers have soe bad behaviors and habits while visiting soe places of interest. Soe ake noises in public places. Others throw rubbish and write or draw everywhere and so on. As a iddle school student, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors. For exaple, throw rubbish into dustbins and don’t write or draw on the relics. Don’t ake noises in public places. We’d better follow guides and obey orders. At the sae tie, we should not only protect natural environent but also respect local custos and traditions.
【解析】本题是就一起热点网络时间发表看法。故动笔前先要围绕自己想要表达的观点确定材料，表达自己对这起事件的看法，同时注意自己是中国人，要自觉的维护自己国家的形象。结合材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在及时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
27．
Liu Wei, an arless piano player, has a very special experience. He lost his ars in an
accident when he was 10, but he didn’t give up his drea of being a pianist. He tried to practice playing the piano with his feet. Finally he realized his drea in "China’s Got Talent".
As a student, I’ve learnt a lot fro his story. We ay eet a lot of difficulties in our future life, but we should believe that our drea will coe true by working hard. No atter how hard life is, we won’t fail unless we give up our hope.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求写一篇介绍无臂钢琴演奏者刘伟的短文。本题给出的材料较为详细，写作中首先要描述一下刘伟的经历，然后谈谈自己受到的启示。通过阅读材料可知在叙述刘伟的经历部分主要用一般过去时态，在表达自己感想时可用一般现在时态及将来时态。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。
28．
Ji used to be very busy and hardly had tie to play. After the exa, he would like to travel to Beijing to relax hiself. He thinks it’s a beautiful city. He can learn ore history about China at the sae tie. Ay, a girl who is interested in coputer, hopes to learn how to use the coputer after the exa. Then she can do any things on coputer. As for e, I would like to do soething different. aybe I will volunteer y tie to help other people in the poor area. I’ sure I’ll be happy when I help the.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，所给材料非常详细，分别介绍两个人的想法。写作中注意将两个人的想法表达清楚。注意应用所给单词短语。在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性。结合材料可知本文时态主要是一般现在及将来时态，注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。
【答案】One possible version:
y Drea
I want to be a writer when I grow up. Writing has been part of y life. Through writing I will be able to share y ideas and ake friends with others.
I can achieve y drea by reading widely and by working hard at school to learn as uch as possible. It’s also iportant to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn fro the.
【解析】首先审题：写自己的梦想。其次：注意写作要点中要陈述两条理由和实现梦想的三种方式。最后注意结束语。
30．
One possible version:
Whitecloud: I coe fro China k.Co] . I’ also a iddle school student like Ding. When I read the news, y heart ached. What Ding did ade e sad. Ding should feel sorry for that. As a student, it’s very iportant to care about what we do in public. For exaple, we’d better keep our voice
down . I will be ore polite to people around e and take better care of public things. And I’ sure we Chinese will show our best to the whole world!
Sincerely yours,
【解析】本题是就一起热点网络时间发表看法。故动笔前先要围绕自己想要表达的观点确定材料，表达自己对这起事件的看法，同时注意自己是中国人，要自觉的维护自己国家的形象。结合材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在及时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
31．
Soe students thought that E-Books are good for environent. They can save plenty of paper. So people needn’t cut down too any trees. E-books are also very nice and sall. And they are easy to carry .people can search for inforation conveniently. They can be read in the environent without light.
But soe students disagreed with the. They thought if they use the for a long tie, they are bad for their eyes. While having classes, students can’t ake notes directly in the books. Soeties, they can be played by students .I think E-books will be replaced the traditional books in the future. I a looking forward to the day.
【解析】
试题分析：本题要求写一篇关于推广电子书包议论文。要求中已经给出了主要要点比较简略，写作中注意根据要点组织内容，从正反两方面介绍人们赞成或者反对的观点。动笔前先要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改。
32．略
【解析】
试题分析：本文属于陈述各方观点的议论文作文，主题是讨论家庭作业的必要性。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容，注意表达自己的观点。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
Dear Class,
It is our turn to report.
That’s all. Thanks.
33．One possible version:
Our school Draa Club is holding a fil activity. We saw Life of Pi last week. It is directed by Ang Lee. And he gets the Best Director Award for it. The fil is about the story of a young an called Pi. He takes a boat trip alone. He not only has to deal with difficult weather conditions but also needs to find enough food for hiself. And at last he coes back hoe safely.
any people think Life of Pi is one of the year’s best fils. It tells us we should brave enough to face any proble and find ways to solve the. We are heroes of ourselves.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍你在看了李安执导的电影《少年派》的感想。在写作此类作文时，首先要将电脑内容进行简单介绍，然后在针对某个问题发表自己的感想。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一三人称，句子结构主要为系表结构，主谓宾结构，注意运用所给短语。写作中注意叙述顺序，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。文中适当使用代词，注意避免句式的单调重复，避免单词及语法错误。
34．略
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍了学生们生活的变化。本题以表格形式给出了主要写作内容，写作中注意将学生们过去和现在的生活介绍清楚，病发表自己的看法。故动笔前一定要认真阅读材料，根据材料内容确定人称，时态等问题。结合材料可知本文可能涉及过去，现在和将来三种时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。内容上应注意描述的全面性，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。
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I’ glad to hear that you are coing to China soon. In y opinion, both air travel and train travel have advantages and disadvantages.
Travelling by air can save uch tie. For exaple, if you fly fro Qingdao to Guangzhou, it takes only two hours. If you take the train, you will not get to Guangzhou in 23 hours. Also, air travel is ore cofortable. The train is usually crowded and you have to sit on your seat for a long tie. You will get tired after the long travel. On the other hand, train travel also has its advantages. First, it costs only 550 yuan while travelling by air costs 1200 yuan. What’s ore, you can enjoy the beautiful countryside views outside the window along the way.
Which would you prefer? I a afraid you have to ake your own choice. If you need ore inforation, please let e kno
Have a nice journey!
Yours
Xiao Li
【解析】
试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈两种交通方式的利弊。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。